Gliding to life

( march 27th 1999)

Restlessly my soul glides, so peacefully across your crystal like space

Dancing to the rhythm of wind blown melodies

Touching a white cloud with my very finger tips

Feeling its imaginary existence playing with my every emotion

FREEDOM. .my soul cries out



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  1. this was very freeing.

    • Thank you Breana πŸ™‚

  2. love love it.

    • Thank you Jingles…very motivating comment πŸ™‚

  3. Love your poetry work here.

    Your link is under fresh poets to explore, welcome join poets rally week 37, you make new poetic friends and enjoy encouragement, it is free and fun…

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  4. Interesting read, a lot said with few words. Excellent work πŸ™‚

    • Thanks poetryoftheasian, i never really thought of it that way…i guess the words felt like a lot of descriptions cause i could feel and see what i was writing πŸ™‚ that is a lovely compliment

  5. Nice piece!

    • Thanks Lynn, yours too πŸ™‚

  6. welcome in…

    love the imagery..
    Happy Rally…

    let me know after you are done a minimum 18 commenting…

    • Just finished…thanks Jingle πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  7. Beautiful–you are so very expressive. Thank you.

    • Thanks Bodhirose πŸ™‚ appreciate your comment greatly

  8. Very sensual..

    • Thank you Kevin

  9. A very liberating and inspirational poem πŸ™‚ Thanks for sharing!

  10. Oh Yes! Freedom…the basic ingredient to life.


    • Yes, the sense of freedom to glide to sour above it all πŸ™‚
      Thanks Emmanuel

  11. Felt free…

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