I must admit

(1-May-2011)

I conquered a fear

At last I did

A fear of “The Fear”

I must admit

Unknown to me that I could be

Free of worries that have crowded me

I sat there praying for my safety

As the wind scraped my face and my body

While sitting on a machinery

That was said to be of no safety

In shocking view of my reality

I realized that Fear was just my imagery

It had no way of knowing my ability

And therefore I broke my dependency

Freedom replaced the Fear in me

The Motorbike Freed the whole of me

For the story click on “Ecstasy at its Best“

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on May 1, 2011 at 3:11 pm Comments (24)
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On May 1, 2011 at 9:33 pm Mohammad Waqas said:

It’s really fantastic; I really love the poetry. It’s the language with which you can say words in short but deep and meaningfull.

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On May 4, 2011 at 6:31 pm nothingprofound said:

“I realized that Fear was just my imagery.” What a great line! Truly, Rain, freedom lies on the other side of fear.

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On May 5, 2011 at 4:27 pm UmamaheswariA said:

FREEDOM…its a precious word and yes,I was swaying along your poem 😀

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On May 5, 2011 at 6:50 pm bendedspoon said:

woot to your freedom! I love this one 🙂

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On May 5, 2011 at 7:45 pm -D said:

This reminded me of the time when I went ziplining with my friends and I was screaming my head off and my friends were all laughing at me because I was so scared.

Beautiful!

Please do check out mine: http://dcec.wordpress.com/2011/05/05/thursday-rally-week-43/

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On May 5, 2011 at 8:37 pm kez said:

great! we have all felt it at some point you put it wonderfully ….glad you overcame yours ..thanks for sharing

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On May 5, 2011 at 10:10 pm Jingle said:

love the word flow.

well played,
have fun in the rally.

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On May 6, 2011 at 1:27 am Ana Goncalves said:

Wow, what a captivating story! I loved the way it just captured every corner, and the way the unexpected turned into such a memorable experience. Beautiful.

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On May 6, 2011 at 4:22 am Jess said:

What a great poem. I really loved the story it told.

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On May 6, 2011 at 2:03 pm Alcina said:

First of all the image is damn capturing..
I loved how you conquered the fear..Beautiful!

Alcina

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On May 6, 2011 at 5:26 pm Marlee-I Mystic said:

Ain’t no feeling like being free. I love the move from fear to freedom. Great job!

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On May 6, 2011 at 7:28 pm K. McGee said:

Loved this! Reminded me of the first time on the back of our Harley. But actually driving our dirt bike was even more freeing, although once was enough. Talk about a rush.

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On May 8, 2011 at 8:23 am RoughWaterJohn said:

Love the words, flow, rhythm and story. With words as your palette, you paint beautifully.

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On May 8, 2011 at 3:29 pm magher1 said:

Oh! It really feels like freedom 🙂 Deep and true words: ‘In shocking view of my reality

I realized that Fear was just my imagery’
Love it!

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On May 8, 2011 at 6:55 pm genebrother said:

A story well told in poetry.
I am happy you are now free.

Genebrother

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On May 9, 2011 at 1:17 am LoLa said:

I like how the poem unfolded. I like that you faced your fears.

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On May 11, 2011 at 4:53 pm Paul said:

I’m seeing some interesting concepts pop out of this…just what a good poem should do!

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On May 12, 2011 at 12:41 pm andy said:

Great poem really felt it. I’ve always said the way to live life is without fear – it imprisons you however small it is.

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On May 14, 2011 at 8:58 pm mindlovemisery said:

Lovely sentiments and rhymes. Wonderful picture

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On May 15, 2011 at 3:11 pm haggishead said:

really great poem! i love it!

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On May 17, 2011 at 1:39 pm sillyfrogsusan said:

Nothing like risk taking to make us feel alive!

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On May 17, 2011 at 8:37 pm mbwilliams said:

both inspired and beautifully executed, I liked it a great deal

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On July 9, 2011 at 9:34 pm Dishilicious said:

nicely said, made me smile. i know what you mean. 🙂

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On September 20, 2012 at 3:49 pm Poetry & Icecream said:

You’ve put what most of us feel into words and you’ve done it well. Not an easy task. Well done 🙂

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